Wednesday, November 25, 2009

"Be Her"


Even when she was 6 years old, I have always wanted to be like her.
Her, Paulina Tribaldos, the girl that everybody likes, the girl that tells me what to do when I’m whit her, Paulina is the prettiest in the school, who has the boy I couldn’t get.
The girl.
Her.
She.
The one I can’t be.
One day she told me that if I wanted to be like her.
I said yes.
She just smiled and turned around; I wondered and wondered what she was going to do.
The next day she came and gave me a hug and told me that everything I needed to do, was to be myself.
I didn’t get it.
But now I do, I will never be someone is not me.
I will be me always like it or not.
I tell my mom this story and i get embarresed because, i realized how stupid i was by not wanting to be myself.

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3 Comments:

Blogger Steph said...

I think that was so true, you shouldn't be someone you're not...be yourself, even if someone is making you jealous. Good job!

Steph

November 25, 2009 at 8:45 AM  
Blogger JuanDiego said...

Very good story. I like the way you described how you felt about her. Nice use of stanzas and paragraph. Good job telling the truth oooooooooohhhhhhhhhh yyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh

November 25, 2009 at 8:57 AM  
Blogger Liz Marie said...

WOW it was like rally nice it was a confession that I am sure that it have tach others , and me the lesson of always being your self :)

November 25, 2009 at 8:59 AM  

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