Alone
Your eyes are a sunset,
Mine are the night.
Your hair is a straight, blonde, beautiful one,
Mine is a curly, brown, hideous one.
You have him
The guy that used to be mine
The guy that everyone likes
The guy that left me.
You have them
The friends that used to be mine
The friends that everybody wishes for
The friends that left me.
You have her
The best friend that used to be mine,
The best friend that was only mine
The best friend that left me
You have everyone
I wish I was like you
I wish I was you.
You are a star.
You are the day.
You are perfect.
I am the moon.
I am the night.
I am imperfect.
Now my hope is gone
And I’m left here
Alone.
Labels: Poetry Friday
posted by Alexa Ceja at
9:11 PM
3 Comments:
Alexa, this is truly a beautiiful poem! After I read this, I was speechless. How can you write so perfect with such an excellent imagery?!!?!?!?
I adore your refrains. I understood every part of the poem, and once again, AMAZING :)
Wao great poem! I liked how you used a refrain :D
WOW I LOVE IT I AM SPEECHLESS WOW ABSOLUTELY BREATHTAKING AMAZING
PS I AM USING CAPS BECAUSE THE POEM IS STILL THROBBING IN MY HEAD DUE TO ITS PERFECTNESS
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