South Beach - Benjamin Moore - 2043-50

She walked
a long the beach
Louie Vitton bag
and Big Couch sunglasses.
It was a Saturday
the day she would never forget.
Her perfect body,
her amazing eyes,
her impressive green bathing suit,
she was a Goddess.
The night fell upon her
and she fell upon,
tall, tanned, tough guys
surrounded her like a small
sinless, sweet, cub lost between trees.
Her innocence made her blind.
Clothes thrown,
Messy hair,
Alcohol on her breath,
promises made,
in the heat
of the moment.
One night
it was all it took,
four green walls around her,
her feet touching the
cold white floor,
sitting on a toilet with
the water running,
"my parent will think im showering"
thats how easy it
was for her.
Two lines on a small screen.
Her life had
just began.
Hiding the pregnancy test
was a maze.
Nights crying,
regret all over her,
never knowing about that once
flawless guy
destroyed a perfect girls life,
all on a Saturday night.
10 Comments:
I am in awe. Enough said.
ownage
Great story with great imagery!
WHOAaa. Intense:P Awesome imagery!!! Your line breaks REALLY made it flow! But is it "Coach" or "Couch"? I love it anyway!!!
Since Mrs.Meadows read your poem at loud in class I wanted to read it all, its really good and it has a lot of imagery.
De verdad, its excellent.
GOOD JOB!
KEEP IT UP:)
:o this was a great story alexa, i noticed you put a lot of thought into it, and it was really interesting how you went step by step and all the details. really great story
very creative theme, i see that this color made you think about many things... I liked the way you made it flow from one part of a story to the other. Good job!
good jobb! I really liked it aleza:) this was greatt
Amazing job Alexa! I am in awe too, the poem matched perfectly with your color and is just spectacular! :)
Haha, Great Poem Alexa! Very nice how you could connect a color to this. You just made one mistake at the top when you said "her Big Couch sunglasses," it it Coach. ;)
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